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Arena III
(02-04-2011)
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Provincie Antwerpen
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Belgium
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Europe
PHOTO DESCRIPTION
another for the Braem project
APN NIKON CORPORATION NIKON D700
Registred camera NIKON CORPORATION NIKON D700 with TOKINA 12-24 f/4 AF DX (Reflex camera)
EXIF information f:7,1 - 1/250 - 200 ISO  (no flash)
Orignal filename dsc_6434c.jpg

comments

04/09/2011
OK, here's what I think.  Stronger than the last one (which you deleted).  Where?  in the composition, of course, I like how you break out the scene into 3 parts using the architecture ... however, the smiling figure is too trite, not enough uumph, personality, originality, if you get the drift ... perhaps you should revisit this place and angle and wait for some interesting character catch, perhaps some old wino in crutches hanging out in the balcony :-).
cheers,
Cristian